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Young Writers Society



A Blessing

by Caerulean


Have you ever noticed,
or recognized even,
this blessing in ‘disguise’?

Just…how long have you been in this site?
And how long has it already been since you logged in
seconds, minutes, or maybe hours ago?
Do you even log out?

How many friends have you made here?
How many members have you followed?
How many followed you?
How many wall posts?
How many comments?
How many notifications in your feed?
How many ding dongs and sound effects have you heard in the most epic chat room?

How many stories, poems, essays, photographs, and artwork have you posted?
How many of them have got featured already?
How many likes,
how many views,
and, most importantly,
how many reviews did they receive?
Are they harsh criticisms?
Are they helpful critiques?
Are they simply short and sweet comments?
They all matter!

Now, I’m gonna ask you the most possibly dreaded question –
How many reviews have you made?
How long has it been since you’ve made one?
Were you of any help at all in your reviews?

How many times have you smiled, laughed, ‘lol’-ed, ‘rofl’-ed, ‘roflol’-ed, and maybe cried, while you are here?
How many emoticons have you used?
How many emoticon codes do you know?
Do you know more than I do?

Tell me,
how much fun did you have in this site?
Will you stay forever?
Will you stay even though you are no longer a ‘young writer’?
How much do you love this site?
How much are you grateful for it?
Well, probably, you’ve noticed now
that the blessing I’m talking about is YWS!
Love it. Thank for it.
It’s a blessing!
And a huge one indeed!

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I hope you like it! :D Sorry if you're bothered by the huge number of questions in this poem. >.<


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Sun Apr 24, 2011 10:52 pm
Snoink wrote a review...



I will let you know that I read this poem because I didn't want to get cursed! D:

Anyway! This is a cute piece. The only problem is that it reminds me that I kind of need to get a life, other than YWS. XD

Also, I am very, very afraid of the answers to these questions. I don't really want to know. XD




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Sun Apr 24, 2011 10:02 pm
NLPrincess13 wrote a review...



i like it very much, i enjoyed
yes, it's a blessing . i truly love YWS! it's perfect place. i know i wasn't here much, but I'm doing my best and everyone here is very helpful :D
thanks for sharing, keep up the good work. don't forget to review :D :D





This is the way the world ends, not with a bang but a whimper.
— T.S. Eliot