Published January 15, 2012
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I see you all the time
around the yard
and on my mind
i guess i wanna say
i wanna be more than friends
but the sun is burning
and its blocking your view
from what is sitting
right in front of you
I'll see you walking
right down my street
the sun is shining
down by your feet
so open your mind
and you might just see
on the sunny side of the street
Why don't you
change your point of view
and you might just
learn something new
just like the ways
that i feel for you
I'll see you walking
right down my street
the sun is shining
down by your feet
so open your mind
and you might just see
on the sunny side of the street
I see you smiling
when you look at me
but i'm just not sure
what it's meant to mean
so do you love me
oh tell me please
on the sunny side of the street
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