Published January 14, 2012
Okay this is another rough idea that still needs developing but thought i would get it on here for you guys to check out
V1
It seems like only yeaterday
when we were starting something new
and all your troubles,
were way behind you
it all seemed so innocent
but were we that naive?
thinking our lives could be simple
Chorus
Remember when we used to huddle close
when i was your shoulder to cry on
when all that hurt
became eachother's to bare
but just remember,
you'll always have me to depend on
V2
As time went on things began to change
things got tougher
and i'm not sure who's to blame
i know what doesnt kill us
only makes us stronger
but i'm glad
we didnt have to go much longer
V3
Autumn turned to winter
and winter turned to spring
once again we put the past behind us
ready to start again
but it seems
that every time we try
i end up in the pouring rain
all over again
So yeah let me know what you think
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