Published November 18, 2008
She wakes up late at night
her vivid green eyes filled with lies
memories that just wont die
her lips tremble
the same old story
you know you wont be sorry
she opens her arms
tells you you're the only one
but there's a ghost in between
someone you cant quite see
with every touch you whisper
willing her to remember
but shes falling into nothing
in that moment you think this is it
that's when she says his name
the worlds stands sill
seconds go by
you don't even know why you try
all you want to do is turn on the light
maybe than it wont be so easy for her to pretend
because god knows no matter how hard you try
you're not him...
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