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As I stepped carefully through the trees, I paid close attention to my surroundings. At the tiniest of movements, my muscles tensed. Up ahead, I could feel the presence of someone’s aura. I smirked, my fangs glinting in the sunlight.
I leaned forward hurrying towards the aura. Moments later, I stood in a meadow, facing a man’s back. “So you’ve come?” the man said not turning around. “And what if I did?” I asked snarling. “You’ve only sped up your death, that’s why you shouldn’t have come,” he said.
I slid my hand down to my thigh, removing my bloodstained dagger from its pouch. “I know you control blood, but do you think you can beat a fallen god?” the man said turning around finally. I smiled, as I faced the man who once trained me. “You know, Jiko, even though you trained me, I know all your moves. I’ve made more weapons,” I said smiling.
“Oh John, are you so sure?” Jiko said. “My name is Bloody!” I snarled slicing my wrist with the dagger. A single drop of blood dripped before the wound closed. The drop touched the ground, where it expanded, forming an upside down pentagram. “Beware this power of mine,” I told Jiko. The sky rumbled and I looked up as a drop of blood landed on my face.
The blood inside my body began to move around. My eyes changed from black to red. I lowered my head facing Jiko as a sword appeared in my hand. The tip of the blade dripped with constant blood, never ending. “The blood within my weapons contains the blood of all the enemies I’ve slaughtered,” I said smirking.
I lunged forward towards Jiko, smiling. I swung my blade, barely missing his arm. An invisible force slammed into me, sending me into the air. I landed on the ground skidding in a kneeling position. Smirking, I lunged forward, quicker this time, slicing into his thigh. A small amount of his blood was drawn into the sword’s blade.
“You know what happens if I even get one drop of you blood. My blade will convert it to a poison that will kill you if it gets in your bloodstream. That is the power of my Bloody Vengence,” I said. Jiko smile and a dark energy slammed into me shoving me to my knees.
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