Hey !
You know the starting of your poem is really really cute and sweet bit you lost the hold after
" Then I grew into a kid "
Okey thiings changed and we also have tto but why so sad.
Anyways you tried your best and you succeeded except that you have lack in command on your grammar part and the rhythm.
I enjoyed and memories of my childhood also revived.
Keep it up with nice efiting of grammar
Blessings!
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