Ello. Here to review! Happy review day, by the way. Let's see if YWS can get that review goal.
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Spoiler! :
Suspense! Hmm, what happens next and what did happen that he hoped Sir didn't see? Why did he have to lock the door when Darany went to get him food (surely his parents wouldn't attack him)? Now I have to read the next chapter.
Keep writing!
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Points: 20
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