Although, I believe that the happiness in which you speak is completely unrealistic and such, I believe that that the fact that you did this in 5 minutes, and have no prior experience in writing poetry, it's pretty darn good! So congrats to you, you just wrote a poem!
I also have to say, that I totally do wish that happiness like this existed cause it would be freakin AWESOME!!!
I'll have to check out some more of your work, and well good luck with the whole contest thing.
Good luck writing, and I look forward to reading some more of your stuff!!
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