Well, this was an interesting idea for a haiku! Honestly, if you follow all the rules with this sort of poem, it can't go wrong.
I hate to inform you, but haikus TECHNICALLY are supposed to be about nature. However, this was such a cool haiku that I shall only take off half a point from your overall rating.
Overall rating: 9.5/10
Your avvie is adorable!
Keep writing
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