Hello Semi. well here I am for a review.
Well I feel like this is not even a poem more like just a bunch of questions that don't have much relation to each-other, also you are directing all these things at the reader and not all of them are exactly nice here it and example.
Semi wrote:you ain’t fucking shit.
Yes I would say put it somewhere in the categorizes that it belongs.
This is an okay poem you have a nice way of making everyone think about what you say.
Keep writing and good luck.
~Jonathan~
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