Flying Time

Hello there here I am to save you XD with a review.

Well I really hope that this short little review will help you out some.

OK you are definitely very very very good at poetry I also really like this you know I have never read a peace of poetry this good and believe me I have read a lot of poetry although if anybody else reads this I mean no harm to them just stating that this is really good.

This is really good I hope you do a lot of posts this was awesome I would love to see some other posts of yours this is really good.

Keep writing I think you have a good talent for this kind of thing your spelling and grammar and such was great>>>

Good work and good luck.

Until later good bye.

~Jon~

I hope I didn't ramble sorry if I did.

I also hope that this helped ahh and every thing that anyone else has writ bellow it is probably good. XD

Once again good work and keep writing.

I love the beginning of the poem. I totally understand it this is how i feel. You made me think of my past and mistakes. I found this poem amazing. Great job

this is good read. keep it up

Well I guess the only problem here is capitilization. I know we're on the internet, but since this is a poem, it'd be more appropriate if you don't skimp out on using that "SHIFT" key.
But other than that, it was pretty good, I enjoyed it. And don't feel bad man, I make mistakes like these all the time!