This is the troll's story of the Three Billy Goats Gruff. I did this as English homework. Please review and be as critical as you like
The golden sun shimmered over a field of the lushest grass, and on the lushest grass were beautiful emerald stems- with beautiful petals at the top. Candy floss clouds hung in the sky, next to the colourful rainbow; ah summer, great in the morning. The bushes were like… the Big Mean Goats fur.
Yes, let me tell you about the Big Mean Goat; Lesley is his name I think but I don't call him that. He's very, very mean (although you've probably guessed by the title. I despise of him so much, and his younger brothers aren't that great either. Anyway, let me tell you the whole story.
As I was gardening peacefully, my eye caught the field of the lushest grass and I couldn’t look at anything else. I remembered when the BMG(Big Mean Goat) tore all my hair off, so I had to make some hair out of grass- horrible!
I liked to garden a lot, although I wasn't very good at it, the grass always died. The goats maintained their grass so well that I always wondered how they did it because all they ever do is eat and eat and eat!
I decided what I was going to do: I would ask the goats if I could play with them on their lovely grass. There was a little bridge that separated our two fields. The BMG saw me and stared. At that moment, I was frightened.
I walked a quarter of the way of the bridge, thinking that the BMG would charge at me like a raging bull. However, he just trotted away when his youngest brother came.
“What do you want then?” asked the small goat in a high-pitched voice. My fear melted away, so I wasn't that scared anymore.
“Could I play in your grass?” I questioned, sounding hopeful. He gave me a weird look and I started trembling.
“I don’t know, if you let me play on your field of grass, I’ll call my older brother,” he squeaked. I nodded and walked to the half-way point of the bridge. The middle-sized goat approached me; his fur was as grey as an elephant’s skin.
“What do you want then?” He asked in a normal voice, standing broad and tall.
“Could I play in your grass?” I questioned, sounding hopeful.
“I don’t know, if you let me play on your field of grass, I’ll call my older brother.
I walked all the way across the bridge and got to their field, my heart started thudding; it was amazing. Looking up at the clouds that were diamond-white, I felt the grass wave about my ankles.
I looked at the flowers with pretty petals. The stems were long and thin, and the petals gleamed: amber yellow, sapphire blue and ruby red.
My fantasy was ruined when I noticed that the BMG was towering over me!
He has an extremely grotesque personality, and when he stares at you with his blood red eyes like the devil; you’ll want to jump up and run away. If his fur was green, he will look like a giant bush. No, a ginormous bush because he had a monster of a body. He was born with spiky teeth like the end of jagged rocks. His hooves are extremely sharp, and his fur is ebony black.
“Go half way across the bridge!” He yelled, in a low voice; I did because I really couldn’t say no. He charged at me with his hooves pointed out, racing across the bridge.
(I was surprised that it didn’t break!) He knocked me right off of the bridge, and I landed with a great thud.
By the time I woke up, there were already rumours about me being some sort of evil troll who lives under the bridge and whoever walks across shall never come back. Quite poetic, eh?
I’ve made my own home under the bridge, and I have become so angry that I tell people to go away if they walk across the bridge, simply because it makes a huge racket!
Oh and you won’t believe this, they’ve published a book about three goats that triumphantly get across the bridge safely. Can you believe that? Well that’s my side of the story…
You believe me?
Don’t you?
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