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The Phoenix Poem

WaywardBird · 2010-10-20T21:25:16Z

So, here's my second poem posted on here, hope it's good but you never can tell. At least, I don't think you should trust the writer who can tell. Editors, ready the red bull and red ink, and go racing. :smt001 Take now a wild guess doesn't have to be the best as long as you don't let the world decide how this life is going to fly How something will spin around, and you'll never ever touch the ground Be sure that you're pure of heart that every tragedy is a new fresh start and you've the strength to rise again you're life has ended... So, let us begin

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Fri Apr 29, 2011 2:04 pm

amandajo says... · Fri Apr 29, 2011 2:04 pm

Thanks for clearing that up for me.

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Fri Apr 29, 2011 2:40 pm

Nihasa says... · Fri Apr 29, 2011 2:40 pm

hi, i really liked the simple yet intricately meaningful poem compared to the life of d mythological bird PHOENIX...Yet ,it seems to me that the comparison could be more empathatic...

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I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
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