When I Think of You...

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Butterflies dance in my stomach,
whenever I think of you.
My eyes shine like stars,
when I think of you.
The sun smiles at me,
and I know it’ll be a wonderful day.
When it rains,
I see rainbows and I think of you.
There’s something magical,
I just can’t grasp.
Every word you say entrances me,
every sentence you ever said reverberates in my head.
You make me want to dance.
I feel like a child again,
when I think of you.
When I’m cold,
I think of your arms wrapped around me.
I dream about you never letting go.
When I sleep, I dream of you.
You’re there to save me.
When I think of you,
my cheeks turn a bright shade of red.
I remember ever second I’ve ever spent with you.
When our hands brushed,
your hand was so soft.
When we first talked,
I barely managed to say hi.
Your eyes,
I get lost in them every time.
I think of when I bumped into you by mistake.
I feel comfort every time I say your name.
When I think of you,
I think of you without me.
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Well first off, I'd like to say that this poem really spoke what I felt inside about someone. Your word choice was well picked, and it was lengthy. However, you were repetivie with "When I think of you" I know that that's what the title of the poem's called, but it was repeated too often for me. Good poem though, I liked it! =D




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*shock*
this is so wierd, its exactly how i feel.
your writing is amazing
you a credit to the term writer...
thank you for such a great ray of sun added to my day


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