E'in Sof *Short Version*

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(I think this stanza can stand alone...however they were others that went with it that I've also posted it up, but I think this one is the best and since it seems to me to be able to stand on it's own as a poem, we'll call it the short version of E'in Sof.

It is 3 am and the black sky
overhead resembles a snake,
onyx coils poised to strike. I am
Cleopatra and these pearls will
prove my noose. E'in Sof.




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Ooh, I like this, especially the "onyx coils poised to strike" bit. Good stuff.

I think, yeah, you're right, it can stand alone.

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EnchantressMuffin wrote:Ooh, I like this, especially the "onyx coils poised to strike" bit. Good stuff.

I think, yeah, you're right, it can stand alone.

Muffin


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Hmcreamcomplane.

Sounds nice! :D Very pretty.

-ST
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ShadowTwit wrote:Hmcreamcomplane.

Sounds nice! :D Very pretty.

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