Another Deranged Love Song

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Do you think I should post more of my songs?

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Some people are so strange
Some people are just derange
But when I look at you
I see right through me too
So won't you take my hand?
Or are you just gonna stand
And listen to the band?

When my headphones breakdown
I always give a little frown
But then I see you cute
And I put on my best suit
And give a little smile
Because I like your style

Baby, don’t you know?
People are so strange
And some are just derange

So you don't know what all this means?
It's all about those Jeans
Baby
All those genes you've got
Don't you know?




This is a song
It's supposed to be pretty upbeat and happy!
:)
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derange

Should be DERANGED.

I'm not rewally the lyrical person... But I liked it. it was OK. But not like I'll buy an album unless you improve. Don't let me get you down, I'm really tired now...

But you should keep posting, don't let people get you down, man. That ain't what music or writin' is about :)




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shoudn't this be in the lyrics section?
ahh well.
it's good, but i had a little trouble flowing with it...
*AstrangedbeaR*




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AstrangedbeaR wrote:shoudn't this be in the lyrics section?
ahh well.
it's good, but i had a little trouble flowing with it...



Don't 'flow' with it!
Sing with it!
Aha. :lol:

and my brother, Nate, didn't tell me there was a lyrics section.
Oh well. :cry:
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