RavinG

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This has to be one of the most crappiest and filthiest things I have ever written. Not dirty, but just terrible. I hate it. But raw emotion comes out like this in word form. It's going to, perhaps, be a song one day. It's about my dad... (It's that time of YEAR AGAIN! The annual I Hate My Dad Day! Winner recieves a new Dad!)

I want to scream
LOUD
LOUD
LOUD

In your ears
For all to hear
I want to scream

I hate you
I never liked you
You killed me
Inside

And my mind
Went from straight
To confusion
Because of you

My mind is red
With anger
I hate you
I hate you
HATE
HATE
HATE YOU


Maybe if I go away
You won’t have to
SAY
THOSE WORDS TO ME

I’m sick of your voice
And of the sight of you

Don’t know why but,
This is who I am
And I don’t want to
HELP IT
CHANGE IT
STOP IT

All because of you

I’m afraid of nothing
But your words
And the cold
You put me through
All I can take right now…
Take forever (It was a frozen hell)

O’ sweet Irony!
Sing to me
Let me know
When I can go
O’ sweet joy!
Let me smile
Let me get away
AWAY!




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God i now know how horrible he is how unconsiderate of privacy he is, and i can understand how you hate him so this poem fits perfectly.
Also I promise i'll come and i never break a promise never.
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
We are the ink, we are the quill.
[The Ink And The Quill (Be Afraid) - Anti-Flag]




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Hargh, I love this poem, I take back what I said about it being crap, the ONLY time I'll take that away from ANYTHING I've ever written...

I trust you, that you're coming...

Anyway... Yeah...
Thanks for the comment, any more brave advisaries?



Don't be sad bc sad backwards is das and das not good
— LadyMysterio