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Who, What, When, Where, Why?



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Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:08 pm
Ladyequine91 says...



Who?
The one who ruined my life.
When?
November 28, 2003
Where?
Somewhere between Annapolis, Maryland and Fort Wayne, Indiana
What?
He left me with no intentions of returning
why?
Who knows why! I as well as other people have been known to blame it on me, although we all know it wasn't my fault.
How?
The doctors said heartattack, but my grandpa's diagnosis was heartache, and it was my fault.
So...who?
My best friend in the entire world...my dad.
  





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Wed Jan 25, 2006 10:30 pm
Angel17 says...



thats quite sad. But i liked the poem, the questions were a good idea
Real poetry are those with the best words in the best order

~~~~~~~~Mandy~~~~~~~~~
  





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Fri Jan 27, 2006 2:17 pm
Ladyequine91 says...



thanks, but i have to give credit where credit is due, the question thing was my teachers idea. she is a genius when it comes to writing, she has taught me all that i know! THANKS MRS. YORK!
  





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Fri Jan 27, 2006 6:15 pm
Empress Kat says...



Sad. Moving. Loving.

I like it. But I think the question thing is just too new to me... it just comes off as awkward. But I do believe it is in my own head.
Plan B is always "Die Trying."
  





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Sat Jan 28, 2006 12:25 am
Doubt says...



Empress Kat wrote:Sad. Moving. Loving.

I like it. But I think the question thing is just too new to me... it just comes off as awkward. But I do believe it is in my own head.


That's pretty much how I feel.
Cuz I'm praying for rain and I'm praying for tidal waves.
I wanna see the ground give way. I wanna watch it all go down.
  








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