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I love it! The idea is really good and well developed and the imagery really draws the reader in. The way you varied your sentences created a sense of flow. Also, I like the sections where you use one word and then a longer sentence but careful not to over do it. And perhaps divide the poem into stanzas so each section can be more emphasised upon. I really like the theme and the way you built upon it throughout the piece. I love the way the poem finishes:

"Smiling
I chuckle at the scowling letters
That's much better, I murmmer"

Despite the fact it should be "murmur", I like the gentle sense of satisfaction in the words and this rubs off on the reader Great job, keep it up! xXx

Writers block is awful!! And its hard for people to understand it because their not writers or poets....the poem is great!!

that was so brilliant...and no wayy you're definitley not creatively blind! i think you''ve got a creative mind! hehe

Okay, this has been nitpicked to death, so the only thing I can really say is that I love this. This is amazing for someone writing on writer's block. I wish I could produce stuff like this when I can't think of anything to write!

Hi! I'm very new to reviewing so forgive me if this seems silly. First, I don't really like the second line. "Creatively blind." I don't know quite how to picture this. It's just a little strange to me. I feel a bit that when you went from creatively blind to stumbling in a hurricane of letters to my mind blocks my heart that this was a little jumpy. I'd have liked to see a bit more about each line. Otherwise, I like the flow of the rest of this piece and I think you did very well. Awesome job, congratulations on getting your work featured!

I love 'Writers Block'. It's imaginative, defined, beautiful and really really great. The best thing about this is your actually using something which initially was stopping you. I love the way you started the poem with a definitely successful end...

May you have more writer's block and we get to read your wonderful poems...hahaha