please don't go

Words from hate, slowly slide
Pensive lips, this cant be right
Guilty stares hold you tight
Fighting will
Please be alright
Hold my hand, don’t let go
I need you here, lets take it slow

itsjustemilie wrote:Words from hate, slowly slide
Pensive lips, this cant be right
Guilty stares hold you tight
Fighting will
Please be alright
Hold my hand, don’t let go
I need you here, lets take it slow

Strangely, when I read that aloud I got faster and faster as I spoke, and it sounded amazing. You've some skill with words that's for sure, really well written. I love it.

- GhostlyImpressions.

Nice work. I enjoyed this. Short and sweet, my favorite kind of poetry.Your message was clearly delivered.

Did you have a specific rhyme scheme, or did choice words just go together? There isn't an exact ABAB pattern, or even one I can make out. I may be wrong, it might not be a rhyming poem.