Staying True.

The dream of you and me when we share our vows
I'll wait for you...will you wait for me
when our love comes shining through
It'll mean so much to me and more
I'll wait for you...will you wait for me
No matter where life takes us through these hard years
I'll keep you in my heart
I'll wait for you...will you wait for me.
So, until then i'll keep that dream in my heart
And hold it tight
No matter what happens
Just know that I'll wait for you...will you wait for me??

i dont know...i dont really like it. lol just thought id see what someone else thought.

"The dream"

is that part of the poem or the title like put there?

"I'll wait for you...will you wait for me"

? at the end

It was a bit repetive and that got waaaay annoying in my case.
It seems like half the poem was written in
I'll wait for you will you wait for me
status....

Um... I hate using this word and admitting in but, cliche'
and... a bit annoying.... Hm.... And much more.
Edit it, work on making it longer, awkwardness...

I like the topic. Do you know or is it about TLW? Just wondering.... But yeah the repetitiveness of "I'll wait for you...will you wait for me" got a little annoying. But everything else I liked.