Teenage Kicks - needs help (13+)

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So this is the time of teenage kicks
Let’s all go out and get pissed
There's time to learn, and time to grow
But we're not afraid to let feelings show
Come take a drag, lets all get stoned
Make such chaos, police will be phoned
Let’s steal a car, driving far
Drive me fast, phases speed past
Let’s make the friends we'll promise to keep
And surround ourselves with love
Breathe in life in great big gulps
And choke and fall and spring back up
Sexual confusion, deranged illusion
Obsessions, confessions, and lack of fuss
Revolution, rebellion is a must
We’ll change the world, and hate it all
And make pollution, choke and fall
Time is no issue, nor is care
For these are the days to share
So share my vodka, share my weed
This is the journey to flower from seed
Now drive me fast in your stolen car
I’ve been places, have you been far?
Touch my skin, make me shiver
Break my heart, make me die
Make adrenaline rush through my veins
And let me bleed it out again
Underestimated, misunderstood
Who gives a fuck? Who cares?
So let’s go get kicks, let’s go have sex
Underage, and unprotected, ending pregnant
Could catch something, could regret
But we are just learning, we’ll forget
We’ll grow up, we’ll mature
But these are the days of teenage kicks
Oh the trees!
Take me back to London please!!!




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I liked this - it flowed well.
You seem to have taken the Hollywood approach on how teens behave, but whatever ;).
I wrote the above just for you.




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Your poem is interesting. It flows well, but I can't tell if you are trying to make it rhime or not.
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