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Liz
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 8:21 am
Liz says... · Sat Jun 18, 2005 8:21 am
Great. I love the tone especially.
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Chevy
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 12:55 pm
Chevy says... · Sat Jun 18, 2005 12:55 pm
Besides the fact that it was written beautifully, it kind of made me shudder. And I sort of have an idea of what it's about and that...sucks.
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Misty
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 9:29 pm
Misty says... · Sat Jun 18, 2005 9:29 pm
er...I don't understand it. :lol: uh...what's it about?
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