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Left 4 Dead - The Beginning



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Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:50 am
Davethepenquin says...



Fanfiction is now awesome.
:D
The Fear Contest - Winners

1st Place - Hit the Black by mikeypro
2nd Place - Makeshift Calamity by jcipriano1
3rd Place - Ashes and Blood by HaydenSmith

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Sun Jul 24, 2011 5:27 pm
EscapeThat says...



I think the grammatical things have all been covered so I won't go over that again. But I will say that I enjoyed the story, I always love a good zombie tale. I liked the subtle differences to usual zombie stories you added in there like them being slower to attack and knowing that it knew he was even in there in the first place. You left me wanting to know more, although I don't predict much of a future for the protagonist after that bite. Has everything its needs, well done.
  








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