I try to avoid down and up as in 'she was up in her room'. 'she was in her room' flows better.
-That
-Had
-Use adverbs sparingly
-Then
-as
-suddenly
-contiguous prepositions, especially over and back
-all cliches
-i could ____(i could see the puppy sounds bogus)
-ing words
-was and were + ing words
-because
-but
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