This is my biggest bad-spot, writingwise. Dialogue? Fine. Character-development? Acceptable. Ability to describe scenes well? Pretty good.
Action scenes? Shoot me before I have to give you an example, you'll be doing yourself a favor.
This is partially because I'm in a few storybooks and battle scenes are something of a requirement, and because the storyline for Kismet will be demanding a battle sooner or later, as with Geezer's Property and an idea-in-the-dough, The House of Crescents Valiant.
Tips, anyone? I'm trying for gunfights for Kismet, a Dark-Ages sort of battle for Valiant and those tips can sort of work for GP.
Thanks!
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