I need a plot critic, simply put.
PM me if you're interested.
More info later.
[EDIT]
Alright. The genre is fantasy/paranormal/romance/a bit of adventure and action.
You can see it as a mix of Eragon and Harry Potter.
Basically?
A boarding school for werewolves and vampires.
Sure, the two species have not been regarded as the top two most friendliest types of beings, but when you're in the School of Shades, you're busy concentrating on a certain spirit called "Lilith".
Imprisoned deep within the Schools in the form of three parts (an amulet, a crypt, and a student in the Schools), Lilith is known as the mother of vampires, who was captured early on by Canus, the headmaster of the schools, then imprisoned in those three parts, to keep from turning all of mankind into vampires.
She's got a husband, Samael. And he's not happy.
Which means it's up to these three students- Valentine Carter, Mina Cullen, and Keiran Kendall- to keep Samael OUT and Lilith IN.
/End Summary.
Lilith and Samael are real mythical creatures. They are both in Jewish folklore.
Now are ya'll interested? >.<
Gender:
Points: 890
Reviews: 125