z

Young Writers Society


Hotel Room /P



User avatar
915 Reviews


Gender: Male
Points: 890
Reviews: 915
Wed Nov 16, 2005 3:57 am
Incandescence says...



Removed.
Last edited by Incandescence on Wed Nov 16, 2005 4:39 am, edited 1 time in total.





Random avatar


Gender: Female
Points: 890
Reviews: 1160
Wed Nov 16, 2005 4:28 am
Elizabeth says...



Hahaha... If this happened then I feel so sorry for your mother... But JESUS if it doesn't open
*falls over laughing*

For once in your life you haven't PM'd me to read this, maybe it's that new...

But this was very interesting, very short, simple, very Brad, espcially the use of cursing where there COULD have been replacements....





User avatar
447 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 2340
Reviews: 447
Wed Nov 16, 2005 5:47 am
Duskglimmer says...



I have to say, I never thought that unlocking a door could take so much effort... but this made me smile. I could have done without the swearing myself, but it wasn't badly over done... nice job...
The robbed that smiles, steals something from the thief. ~William Shakespeare, Othello
Boo. SPEW is watching.





User avatar
683 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 890
Reviews: 683
Wed Nov 16, 2005 4:54 pm
Emma says...



Lmao very good. I don't like the beginning when you repeat the 'or's' but that is probably just your style. Did this actually happen or did you just make it up?








I have writer's block. I can't write. It is the will of the gods. Now, I must alphabetize my spice rack.
— Neil Gaiman