Well, this story did not make all that much sense, but maybe I did not start from the beginning. Over all, it was well written and the grammar was very accurate. I do want to comment of the "a thousand G's and L's", though. I realise it's a figure of speech, but both letters only had three words. Then again... I suppose 'man of three G's' doesn't sound very impressive... Good work, otherwise.
We are not to simply bandage the wounds of victims beneath the wheels of injustice, we are to drive a spoke into the wheel itself. — Dietrich Bonhoeffer
