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chaospigeon
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Wed Mar 30, 2011 8:16 pm
chaospigeon says... · Wed Mar 30, 2011 8:16 pm
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Humanity without society? Impossible. Society without 'humanity'? Possible.
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Fri Apr 08, 2011 3:32 pm
LadyFreeWill says... · Fri Apr 08, 2011 3:32 pm
Well, this story did not make all that much sense, but maybe I did not start from the beginning. Over all, it was well written and the grammar was very accurate. I do want to comment of the "a thousand G's and L's", though. I realise it's a figure of speech, but both letters only had three words. Then again... I suppose 'man of three G's' doesn't sound very impressive...
Good work, otherwise.
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here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings