I liked your story. I think for writing a piece like that you have to be really talented. I am not a professional writer so I don't like to point negative comments on a writing, I liked what I read, to me it was good. I think when someone writes a something not everybody is going to like it so to me is up to the reader, actually nothing is really bad or good is up to the person reading the piece of work. Sometimes really good things get nasty reviews but the public likes it and some other times bad writings get good reviews so to me is up to the taste of each individual. I love your story, keep on writing.
Abbie

