@DamianCyfer, I can see you are trying to turn this into a valid SB, but please go look at other examples of SBs before you continue with your story (if you really want to publish a story, please do so in the publishing center at the top of the webpage)
Former incarnations have been: TheWanderingWizard TheClockworkConjurer TheIllusiveIntellect TheSunderingSorceror And, TheMaieuticMesmerist
The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they. — TheMythMaster
