I only give positive reviews because I don't like to give critism for some strange reason. If you would like a little sunshine in your story, please PM me!
"Funny is a formula for which there are a million variables, and it is impossible to backtrack unless, possibly, you make a living out of it."~Rosey Unicorn
Lawyer jokes aren't funny anymore. Plus... Bee Movie? Really? There are much better kids' movies you could be quoting from. And normal people are boring. XD
5/10
Frylock, please, no books! I can't read; I'm not a loser!
-Master Shake
i love it that was one of my favorite parts of the lion king right before my favorite song "i just can't wait to be king" *rambling now* ok anyway...i give it 9/10