Outside Looking In

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Hi all! I've been away from YWS for a longgggg time and I'm anxious for the critiques again. The piece is called "Outside Looking In" :) Let me know if there is anything specific of yours you want me to read and review, otherwise I'll just check something out that looks interesting.
Thanks :)
Formerly EmilytheNovelist
REL stands for Rachel, Emily, Lauren, the initials of my triplet sisters and I
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The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
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