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zankoku_na_tenshi · 2010-06-04T04:11:24Z

Hi there! My previous Will Review for Food Thread kind of died when I had to take my school-related break from YWS, but now that I'm back, it's open again, and I'm free to review all I like-- and I will. :D Most of my reviews are around 400-500 words in length and focus on things like characterization, plot, worldbuilding and narrative voice (especially characterization--I love me some characters); with maybe a bit about imagery, pacing, and structure if I notice something exceptional about them. Also, grammar and usage are areas of expertise for me, so if you're worried about proofreading things like that, I'm your girl. :smt001 My specialty is fantasy, but I'm willing to review any kind of prose piece. I love to read anything you've got, and I'm totally willing. I'm especially up for reading novels-- I find it much easier to talk about the content of a piece once I've really gotten to know the characters and the plot. I'm all for short stories, too though-- really, as far as prose stuff goes, I'm not picky. I'm also open to stopping by art pieces! I'm not an expert by any means, but I took four years of art in school and I love looking at and talking about it. :smt001 Poetry and lyrics, on the other hand, I'd really prefer not to review. ^^; Sorry, I really do like reading poetry, but I have no idea how it works. You can ask me to review, I don't mind, but keep in mind that whatever critique I leave might be kind of shallow and lame. XDD My reviews are totally free -- I just want to become more a part of the community on YWS, but I'm shy and I figure this will force me out of my reviewing shell. XD Of course, if you want to visit my portfolio and leave a review on something, I won't say no. :wink: But a lot of it is lame and old anyway, you probably won't have much fun reading it. XDD So ask away! Your wish is my command.

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Thu Jul 01, 2010 4:55 pm

zankoku_na_tenshi says... · Thu Jul 01, 2010 4:55 pm

Sure! JulNoWriMo just started for me, so it might be a sec, but I'll get to it as soon as I can. : )

"The world is not beautiful, therefore, it is." --Kino's Journey

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Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:20 pm

SuperSquirrel says... · Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:20 pm

Hello! Can you review my first YWS novel "55th Floor"? The Sci-Fi category is a little misleading, it is written in the style of Fahrenheit 451 (dystopian futuristic novel).

Your fellow Pokémon fan,
SuperSquirrel

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Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:21 pm

zankoku_na_tenshi says... · Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:21 pm

Sure! As soon as I can. ^_^

"The world is not beautiful, therefore, it is." --Kino's Journey

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Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:53 am

zankoku_na_tenshi says... · Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:53 am

The Chaos chapter 2 review is up and posted, the others I'll get to soon. ^_^

"The world is not beautiful, therefore, it is." --Kino's Journey

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MasterofChaos

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Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:37 pm

MasterofChaos says... · Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:37 pm

Thank you so much!

I no longer update here. I rewrote my story entirely. So long and thanks for all the fish!

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Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:28 pm

MasterofChaos says... · Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:28 pm

Hello... It's me again. *smiles nervously*

I am terribly sorry if I am being a bother, but can you review this?

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Again, I am so sorry if I am a bother.

I no longer update here. I rewrote my story entirely. So long and thanks for all the fish!

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Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:33 pm

Munchkinzizzles says... · Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:33 pm

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Romantic short story.

I hope that's okay.

Writing...writing is beyond amazing. Writing is imagination on paper. I love writing more than I can express.

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Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:34 pm

zankoku_na_tenshi says... · Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:34 pm

Sure! I'll get to both of them soon, since I have this afternoon and tomorrow off work. I've got to review shubhi's and SuperSquirrel's stories first, though. ^_^

"The world is not beautiful, therefore, it is." --Kino's Journey

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Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:45 pm

ultraviolet says... · Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:45 pm

Hi Zan! Will you please review the first chapter of my new novel? Please and thank you! Anti Amnesia - Chapter 1

"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."

~asofterworld.com

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Wed Jul 07, 2010 10:57 pm

screamandshout says... · Wed Jul 07, 2010 10:57 pm

Hey would you mind reading one of my short stories?

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Please and thank you.

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Thu Jul 08, 2010 5:09 am

zankoku_na_tenshi says... · Thu Jul 08, 2010 5:09 am

I've finished 55th Floor and all eight chapters of A Criminal's Heart. Chaos, ulterviolet, and screamandshout's reviews are coming up! ^_^

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Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:02 am

zankoku_na_tenshi says... · Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:02 am

The review for Anti-Amnesia is up! Unfortunately, I'll be out of town until Sunday afternoon, but I plan to get screamandshout and Chaos's reviews done then-- I'm really sorry, guys. ;_; My job has been kind of a pain this week.

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Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:17 am

zankoku_na_tenshi says... · Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:17 am

Chaos and Munchkinzizzles's reviews are all done, I'll get to screamandshout's next! ^_^ So sorry all these took so long.

"The world is not beautiful, therefore, it is." --Kino's Journey

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Thu Jul 15, 2010 6:07 am

zankoku_na_tenshi says... · Thu Jul 15, 2010 6:07 am

All the reviews are done-- thanks for your patience, everyone, I hope I helped you out. ^_^

"The world is not beautiful, therefore, it is." --Kino's Journey

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ultraviolet

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Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:40 am

ultraviolet says... · Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:40 am

Hi! I was wondering if you could review Leave Out All The Rest for me. Pretty please, with a cherry on top?

"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."

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