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Someone I knew



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Thu Mar 31, 2011 8:20 pm
iamjemo says...



Someone I knew
by iamjemo

Verse I

My heart misses a piece of it

Something I can’t fill in

It longs for someone I knew

Someone I already knew



Refrain

The truth of salvation

Captivates me

The freedom I long for

Lies within me



Chorus

It’s always You who completes

Always You who sustains

It’s always You who believes

Always You

Only You



Verse II

My life needs a light

The world cannot give

I long for someone I knew

Someone I already knew



Repeat Refrain and Chorus

Bridge

I know you’re the missing piece

I know you’re the light

Jesus, you’re someone I knew

Jesus, it’s always You


Repeat Chorus


(please have some time to review my first lyrics. thanks! :D )
I live to follow.
I follow because I
love.
I am second,
Spoiler! :
Jesus 1st.
  





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Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:56 pm
dregymayfield says...



Is this about Jesus Christ or some Mexican guy named Jesus \"hey zues\" . If it\'s about Jesus Christ I find it hard to believe that you \"knew\" him since you weren\'t born when he was alive. Unless you\'re saying you \"knew\" him from what you read in the bible..either way it doesn\'t mean you really \"knew\" him. You knew who he was from what you read, but that\'s not really a personal friendship or anything. I was trying to make some kind of point but lost all of it now..lol.

Anyway, if this is about Jesus Christ it isn\'t really something I would ever listen to or like. Religious songs are a little difficult to write because no matter what anyone does it always comes out corny and lame. I know this because I\'ve tried to write religious songs before and when I\'m in the process of writing them I feel like it\'s really awesome. It\'s only after I finish the lyric that I realize how pathetic it is.

Although, if it\'s about some mexican guy named Jesus...it\'s still not that great.

Sorry

Jesus still loves you though..lol
  








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