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FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY

Roads of neon red and blue
Peaches biting bread and true
Stories being told
This is getting old

Tired of the lies, GONNA KILL SOME FLIES

FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY

Fantastic miraculous day
The day when you let go
woah ho ho ho

DRIVING INTO SMILES AND FEELING NOTHING ELSE BUT CABLE CORDS
DRIVING INTO NEON LIT ROADS AND FELLING THAT YOU'RE OLD

But it's a fantastic miraculous day

oh we spent that day
living in and living
not growing old
start it off with cotton candy at the fair
which is really kinda rare
to you, then some rides
on the roller coaster
not gonna post her
up to the bulletin boards then she'll get in trouble
blow a bubble
why hide it

FANTASTICALLY, MIRACULOUSLY

oh the the ferris wheel just flew into the sky
it kept turning and turning and turning and turning
while I'm left yearning and burning and earning my dues

DRIVING INTO NEON BLUE AND RED
WHEN YOU ONLY ATE SOME GLUE AND BREAD

fantastic miraculous day you know how it goes

FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY

and don't the earth fly into the sun
when this is all over
cause then you'll believe me
when I say the day grew old
so old and fantastic
and miraculous
the day you'll live
is tomorrow but tomorrow
never comes

when you're having the time of your life the time to eat some soup
wear some shoes
and go out the door

FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY
FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY

Alright, so,

Um, okay?
This didn't really make sense to me, or at al. Lyrics usually have some meaning that the reader/listener could relate to. This didn't have that vibe. In fact, to me, It really just seemed like random words strung together in an attempt of a song.
Think, why is this day fabulous, or miraculous? What could you get your reader to believe in so hat they could relate to the song?

You have a good start.
WickedWonder

I loved this song when you decided to KILL SOME FLIES!
I'll admit, sometimes I didn't understand what was going on, but then I thought about the songs I hear on the radio every day, and realized that's not a big part of songs. Especially Lady Gaga songs. So, good job, that's all I have to say, and KEEP WRITING WHILE YOU KILL THOSE FLIES!

I just wanna say, these are the worst lyrics I have ever written. I've actually speedwritten for this premise of a "fantastic miraculous day" and they turned out better than this, but I changed too much and they really turned out...bad...so I'll either edit this or just post the freewritten one again