Young Writers Society

Dressed all in black
And the tears come streaming
You can’t even believe
That I’m really leaving
But look up to sky above
And the stars will remind you of our love

I wanted to be free so one day I flew
Leaving ya alone with no one but you
If you fly you could probably join me too
But lie to me one last time and we’re through

Pain clenches in your gut
But you gotta say somethin’
Open your mouth
Sends all ‘em runnin’
They don’t give a shit about what you have to say
So save your lies for another miserable day (Hey!)

I wanted to be free so one day I flew (flew)
Leaving ya alone with no one but you (you)
If you fly you could probably join me too
But lie to me one last time and we’re through

Oh whoa
Oh whoa
Oh

Can’t live up to what’s expected of you
Leave this place coz there’s nothing left to do
Still running back to that, I though you grew
As a person, so much that we drew
But you’ll never be as good as me, I’m sorry but it’s true
Oh

Fly…
Back to me,
Back to my soul.
Just fly…
Comfort me,
Tell it to my soul.

Tell it to me straight coz I think I’m dreaming
I finally broke free and released my demons
I got rid of the fear and deceit in my world
Now it’s all warmth where there was nothing but cold

I was sick of the torture
Sick of my life
Sick of the blood shed
Sick of the pain and lies
I sat back and watch it all
With my dry red eyes

I wanted to be free
So one day I just flew

Wow, I haven't heard the song but these lyrics are amazing. I loved the general theme of the song along with the first verse which was my favourite... I think it would benice if therewas a bride to ntroduce each verse to the chorus, perhaps keeping the tune but changing lyrics each time. Good luck with your music

I liked how some of the lines rhymed, liked:

undeadbunnie wrote:But look up to sky above
And the stars will remind you of our love

and

undeadbunnie wrote:If you fly you could probably join me too
But lie to me one last time and we're through

The song has a really nice flow to it too. And I liked the overal theme too.

This is great! You should try to get this to be a popular song! I loved the whole thing. It had such great detail!

These lyrics are simply phenomenal!! You should definetely make this into a song! It's very well done and properly written. I think you're very good at writing lyrics. You have a very good sense of flow and rhyming and such. Keep up the good work and Keep writing!