Never Meant to Fall in Love

Never ever meant to mess up, love.
Never ever meant to make you cry.
Never ever meant to stoop so low.
Never ever meant to fall in love.


But,
Now I have the two of you.
Why?
Must I choose?


Can't you see?
Why can't you see?
I'm in love,
With both of you.
Can't you see?
Why can't you see?
There's no way I can choose.


Never ever meant to stand you up.
Never ever meant to let you go.
Never ever meant to play the wrong card.
Never ever meant to fall in love.


But,
Now I have the two of you.
Why?
Must I choose?


Can't you see?
Why can't you see?
I'm in love,
With both of you.
Can't you see?
Why can't you see?
There's no way I can choose.


This isn't finished, and it's only about the second time I've written lyrics.That might eplain some weirdness in the length of the lines.

Hello there!

Hey, I could see that your lyric is all about a person who loves 2 persons but she can't decide well 'cause she really love both of the.... yeah, I know.It's obvious.

Anyway, Your lyrics are fine but as you see, you tend to repeat words in a stanza.

"Never ever meant to mess up, love.

Never ever meant to make you cry.

Never ever meant to stoop so low.

Never ever meant to fall in love. "

-it's okay but it would be better if it's not repeated. Overall, it's just a suggestion, you know but I liked it.

That's all. Keep writing!

-Peace out!

Okay i really like this! It's amazing and when you're finished i'm sure it will be amazing!

It's really good a little bit too short but good. I liked the flow of it. There's nothing bad about it so Keep It Up (you have talent)

Ikafe

This was great! I believe this can work as a fast song or short song, whichever floats your boat. I already have it stuck in my head.