I wish i could be by your side and pour my heart out

Hey, this is my first song. To give a backstory its about a guy who loved a girl till she moved to florida. Hope you like it

Ooh baby i see you walk past.
I sure do hope the night will last
I smell your perfume it smells nice
you look nice i like your eyes

So i walk over to you
Your body makes me go woo
So i undress you with my mind
Looks like ive made a find

Wooooo wooo wooooo
Thats the sound i make when i see you-ooooo-ooo
I wanna take you home with me
Please please please Oh Please

Oo Yeh you like a sexy cat
No baby you aint nothing fat.
Yeh yeh yeh yeh yeh yeh
Please be rough i hate it fair

Laying on my bed
Not in my shed
Im like a bullet of lead

Yeah thats what i said

Ohhh lalalallalalal
Mmmhmmm Shalalalaal
You make me laugh
La- La Lalalalaa

Whoa whoa whoa
Slow it down right there
Yeh yeh yeh yeh
Cmon baby take off dat thong
Bing bong bong
I know you liking me
Thats what i see
So yeah baby baby
Lets get Crazy crazy

Woooo woooo woooo
Thats the sound i made when i saw youu
Oooo yeh yeh yehhhhh
Wheres my phone i said where?

Mod: Edited rating.

This is inspired. I like the pure genius rhyme of bed and shed. I think you have a real career in the songwriting buisness, and i highly suggest you form a band if you havn't already. I think this would make an excellant metal song and would most certainly sell ATLEAST one hundred thousand records.

This song disgusts me.

You're how old? 13? Yeah...completely inappropriate.

...you're not serious are you?