Almost like a bomb as a clock

Hello people, this is my first song. Hope you enjoy


Flowers are pretty things
Pretty things were not meant to die
Don’t tell me that you didn’t see
Because I know it’s a lie

Chorus:
Let me tell you something
I’ve been around the block
I know how it feels to know
Its something you don’t want
Ticks and Tocks fill the mind
Almost like a bomb as a clock

You can call it sheltering
You can call it strict
I know it aint anything but love
For my baby girl with wings

Chorus

I want to keep you hostage by my side
Keep you safe from the crashing waters
But you always fly away
Go somewhere else and hide

Chorus

I want to keep you safe (x3)

I was a little lost until the end. I understand it now, but you might consider putting more of what you talked about at the end into the middle part?