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Thu Apr 28, 2011 12:43 pm
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Thu Apr 28, 2011 3:09 pm
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Hey Sarg. I feel like a fool for not keeping up with this thread all along -- so now I had to do it all at once... I love this thread so much. I especially liked the ones I 'liked', and I especially-especially liked 8, 12, and 22 -- and especially-especially-especially the reference to Hemingway shoes in 22. You're a really good poet. =)
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Thu Apr 28, 2011 7:57 pm
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Sat Apr 30, 2011 11:19 pm
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I've totally got the alcohol, haha. Let's party!

Congrats on making it to the end and with so much of quality too. I might humbly suggest you revisit 'Roadside Atlas' - the first stanza is really strong, and the second is good too up until the last line and from there it fades, but I think it's worth revisiting.

Anyway, you don't have to care about any of this anymore. It's been good, sir.
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Sun May 01, 2011 9:55 pm
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Thank you, sir, for your kind words throughout! I agree with and will someday heed your suggestion. For now, poetry can go to hell.
  








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