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Month contest, 1st poem, "Fury."



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Wed Apr 06, 2011 2:15 am
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#1. 'Fury'

How can I let go of my anger,
How can I let go of my hate?

I’m so out of control;
How can I make this feeling abate?

Bitterness clamps down on me,
Its icy claws scraping.
Hope flickers, but no, it’s too late!

I honestly want it to end.
I wait for it to end, with a longing heart…
I wait.
Have I not commanded thee? Be strong and of good courage; be not afraid, neither be thou dismayed, for the lord thy God is with thee whithersoever thou goest.
  








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