This is accurate and good but kind of dry. I realize economics are dry and difficult to make exciting, but maybe you could try tospice it up using business metaphors. Otherwise, it was really fantastic, with good variation and mechanics and everything.
"It is a far, far better thing that I do, than I have ever done; it is a far, far better rest that I go to, than I have ever known..." A Tale of Two Cities, by Charles Dickens.
The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth. — Kate Chopin, The Awakening
