3. Flying [Over the Atlantic]

3. Flying [Over the Atlantic]

It felt amazing. Flying without a parachute. Free-diving. Spiralling. Losing my senses. Free as a bird, soaring on the wind.
Yeah I jumped. Yeah it was the dumbest thing I’ve done in my life. But it was also the best.

There should be commas after both "yeah's".

And the I've should normally be "I have", but since this piece is already so informal with all the "yeah's", I guess it's all right.

Yeee.

LOL, great few sentences...But...what happens next?! LOL

Tanya

thanks

Chapter 4 and 5 are up aswell

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