The Sparkly Adventures of Bryce {volume 1}

Once upon a time there was a confused big headed guy named Bryce. He had just been stumped by a question of great brilliance.
"What's a sparkle?"
His whole class laughed at his lack of sparkology. Bryce did not know what to do. He decided to walk in a dwarf-sized (and inhabited) forest. All he could do was stare at his smelly feet and wonder the definition of sparkle. As Bryce was mumbling to himself, he heard a purple bush rustle maniacally.

TBC....

Find out what is behind the purple foliage in the next edition of....
THE SPARKLY ADVENTURES OF BRYCE

and yes, that deserved caps.

This is retarded.

Prokaryote

Hey, only the truest of sparklers can understand this, or be fabulous enough B)
If you're not weird, you're not normal.
But if you'd like to read the WHOLE adventure, check it out at
www.imtheoboeplayer.com/sparkle.html

A little weird, but makes the reader want to read the next one.

big headed

Shouldn't there be a dash instead of a space(big-headed)?

"What's a sparkle?"

Where did he get the idea of such a question from?

dwarf-sized (and inhabited) forest

That's a little confusing.

Interesting story, I wonder what happens.

sounds like a little kid's book.

hahah
Personally I think it happens to be rather incredible
And yes, I'm trying to steal a review from this
sparkology?
I can imagine this as a child's book too
or possibly a poem, one of those light hearted ones for young children.

Haha! I loved this!! It's absolutely adorable and the word "sparkology" made me crack up!

His whole class laughed at his lack of sparkology. Bryce did not know what to do.

I would make this into one sentence...

He decided to walk in a dwarf-sized (and inhabited) forest.

I don't get this sentence at all...Maybe, "He decided to walk in the dwarf-sized forest that he inhabited"?

Anywayz, great job on this and I'm definitely reading the full version of this...My fave line had to be "pondered a question of great brilliance"...
Gold Star for sheer awesomeness!
fluteluvr77<3