Bitter Sweet- Chapter Three

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eviscerate your fragile frame
spill it out in ragged form
a thousand different versions of yourself.




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oooOOoooOOooohhh. that's intense. the guy in her dream she was talking to was Wiley, right? lol.

“No,” I sobbed, my voice nearly out of order. “I couldn’t.”

i liked this phrase.


see me flattened like a pancakes.

im assuming you meant pancake?
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Sorry if i didn't review that last chapter, I was to busy immersed in this story.
There were only two things that stood out to me.
1) This chapter in the beginning didn't start where it left out from chapter two. Instead where Mae is with her mom. I was just wondering what happened between those two chapters.
2) I was right! Or somewhat right. When I said that Mae was a metamorphosis, I'm totally sure she is. And especially her mom. With her mom changing in the basement, there's something weird going on.
Nothing much I'm going to say, 'cause I'm totally intriugued into this story.
-Merry
Mary had a little lamb. Little lamb. Little lamb!

Ugh!! I really hate my name. >.<



It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien