Ok this is something old I found on my computer that I had started but never got chance to continue. I wanted to know what people thought. If it is liked I might consider doing something with this when I finish Shadow Flight.
P.S. I know there is no background and no description that is because this is a sort of extract from later on that I made into a prologue.
We exited warp space too late and were right in the middle of no-man’s-land. Dwindling Lizarian and Human ships were blasting away behind us at overwhelming Vorag battleships, cruisers and a command supper battleship that was holding just behind the main line straight in front of us.
“Sir they outnumber us and the garrison sixteen to one” A Lizarian shouted “Roughly 28 against 448”
“Open fire and get us back to the Lizarian line!” Soraka ordered.
“Incoming!” I shouted as what felt like thousands of missiles were launched at us. The shield took the brunt of the attack but many got through. Most of us were thrown to the floor from the impact.
“Hull is critical we can’t take another hit!” A female Lizarian shouted.
“We need to run now!” I shouted.
“Yet more Lizarians playing at war all of you stand down and you will be spared” the Vorag general Rovok ordered in a confidence sapping calm voice. We all looked at Soraka as the highest-ranking member of the battle the decision fell to him.
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