a little summer love

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:D hello again everyone, this is once again a photo i took. You might see this pose in many photos but i used it an made it my own, i love this pose and found this photo really fun to take and i wanted the sun to be in his hands as if shining through .i also made the clouds purple :smt002 maybe because i'm in love and floating on purple clouds lol now i'm just being silly , as you can see in all my photos i try to make the photo look less like reality and more fun

This photo is blurry yes ,but thats only because i made it smaller and i did not post the full photo only the center object and a little backround,my normal photos are extremely big and can't post them here .

lots of love and kisses from me. :smt003
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Hey,

Welcome to YWS! I don't know anything about photography other than one button means turn off and one button means take picture, but this is really cool and the editing is great!

(By the way, since this is a writing website, it's important to use correct spelling and proper grammar in all posts and chat. Don't worry, you get used to it really fast =D)

PM me if you have any questions or just need a review "D

Grade: A-

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what I know about photography is limited to non-digital cameras and darkrooms and while I like the atmosphere of the picture... the figure sort of looks headless. Maybe that's just because I can't see the whole thing. (There are ways to resize photos, but I'm also too lazy to do it....) Also I thought your font choice was pretty unprofessional and I would have picked something different but that's me... perhaps I'm a stuffy old man now. :(

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Unprofessional? , seriously?
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I agree with perdido, the person in this looks headless. It's a bit of a turnoff. I'm not a huge photographer myself, but I know what type of pictures appeal to me. This one didn't quite do the job, it seemed almost too edited. A great photographer shouldn't need to edit photos, the raw picture should speak for itself. I would suggest taking pictures and resisting the urge to change them. Just a thought, of course! Hope this helped.
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Hey!

I hope you are enjoying in Young Writers Society! :D

Well, I should say this photography is BEYOND awesome! ^^
It looks great! ;)

I love how you imagined the love and your floating in purple clouds. Your really artistic just as your name says!
I'm really fond you because your talent so please post on my wall when you other Photographs!

Me Love to see your's! Hehe xD

Amazing Job! :D
Giving this a 10/10.

Love,
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Love the photo, almost as similar as the previous. ( viewtopic.php?t=87109) Seems that you're of fond of the purple and pink colours that you pick them as a theme for photographs. I was wondering what makes your photos a little bit blurry, do you edit the photo as a whole and then resize them smaller? Usually, I resize the original photo and then edit it, that way it won't appear blurry.

I love the pose though I have found it in many shots before but yours is special. I like the idea of letting the sun rays coming out of the heart-shape- hands. Maybe the head bow wasn't a good idea. You could have made the person stand side-way instead of tilting his/her head down to show the hands.

I liked the editing; the trees and the purple sky they all look quite good.

Love your photographs, I'd love to see more of them.
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