Avenger comic teaser

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Tell me if this would make a good manga :]
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Its a cool use of imagery but I didnt really understand what was happening, it lacked detail.
I think you need explain your idea more in the text and imagery, like just a few more speaking pieces or something.
Apart from that it seems like a good piece and would probably be a good manga.
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Is that guy Avenger?? *concentrates*
This strip could need some details as said by LilySoulMahon could use more words and a little more details on the figures....
It could be a good manga but i don;t think that it could be successful if you continue doing it on MSPaint or any other of its type....
Keep up the good work...
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thanks i like the feedback. =P but yea sry bout the detail lacking. my ms paint is all i got sence adobe photoshop elements just got lost D: but yea the comic is sapposed to be about a zombie apocolips and well.. this is 1 character. if you have any ideas on different characters that would be good in here post =P




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Hey dafreak, I like the plot and the whole idea, with stuff like this your name normally starts with a J, just a guess. Any how, the idea and plot are good may I suggest going to the scripts section and writing out a script? or downloading, GIMP it's a great program,,, it's as easy as MSpaint, with PS tools. Looking forward to more of your work!



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